Strutting Sam
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1950′s JAPAN STRUTTING SAM JIGGER DANCING Tin Litho BATTERY-OP TOY $79.00 |
16 years of age. More information in writing to read:)?
"My name is Sophie Evans and I got way too much mascara this morning and now I feel like my eyelashes are falling. My father strutted down the stairs in a suit and top hat and said he was taking inspiration from Sam Sparrow Black and gold, but personally, I thought he was taking inspiration from shame. My sister, Lily, has been serenading me with Twinkle Twinkle all day, like a record Lined in repetition and my brother has not taken his iPod by the ears for months. My name is Sophie Evans, and when my mother died, my family. "
I was a little confused by the first two sentences (of transition is not there.) The voice sounds pretty good, but I think it has to be a little more in depth. I think this is pretty good, but work on the transitions.